Hello examiner, this is a draft of our project that we have put together for evaluation.
As you can see there are many improvements that can be made to this piece of work. The storyline is very simplistic and thus make the film non sensical. Also, as the film does not have many plot and character elements, viewers may be confused at what is happening throughout the film. For example we see the character 'Nortz' at a party and walking angrily and the reason for that is not revealed. In addition to that, our film does not contain a title at any point of it which may also confuse audiences. Furthermore, our selection of music is laid back and mellow, in contrast to the zealous events taking place in the film. This, in turn, makes our film look idiosyncratic and extremely disorganised. Finally, our student identification numbers are not present so examiners will not be able to mark our work.
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